Wrote by the window in what used to by Ryan's/Now Dan's Class:
It's a Haiku thingy that doesn't actually fit the rules of a haiku.
The rain drums against
Cold Glass windowpanes
Eyes Watch
Brown Hazel Blue.
This one was written outside of the gym, on the sidewalk:
Running
Tripping
Falling
Screaming
Burning on your cheek
You get up
3 years later
Skipping
Chattering
Nervous Energy
People Holding the Door for you
Shoes Scraping Cement
7 years later
Walking
Taller
Feet Skimming the ground
Smiles
Phones
Names Called
The world outside
8 years later
Running
Tripping
Falling
Screaming
Burning on your cheek
Pain
Laughter
A hand
Friends help you back up
I really like the second poem. it showed the passing of time in a single location. AWESOME POEM IDEA!!!
ReplyDeleteI love the second poem as well, it was very descriptive and yet also somewhat mysterious
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